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Adam Jensen Render

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Deus Ex Human Revolution
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1250x2500px 2.45 MB
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The cut is pretty well done all around him, I don't seem to see any choppy places.

However, I've spotted two things you might want to correct.

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As you can see, you forgot to cut the part behind his gun and near his shoulder and the cut of his ear is roughly made.

Also, I know hair is a difficult thing to cut but if I can give you a top, I sometimes take a smooth eraser brush on a low opacity (about 20-40%) and try to smooth the hair as much as possible while keeping it as natural as I can.

As this isn't much of an art piece, I can't really rate you on your vision, originality nor on your impact but for the Technique, I give you a 4,5/5... it might be a bit too much, but apart from the ear and the hair, I think you did an excellent job!